The Official Writing Challenge
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08/20/09
I like the way you compared winter to a season of your life.

There are some errors in spelling and grammar that distract the reader a bit. A more thorough editing, perhaps by an editing buddy, might help.

This was very readable and entertaining.
08/20/09
This was an enjoyable read!
I liked the softness to your voice throughout, and the peace you have for what God's plans are for you. Very nice story.
10/05/09
I liked the story-line and the comparison of the seasons with the seasons in a person's life...Like Jan said, a little editing would make this GOOD story into an EXCELLENT one. Thanks for sharing. I would like further contact with you...Helen