The Official Writing Challenge
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Really had that "A Christmas Story" ring to it, with Ralphie and his red ryder gun. You created a good bit of tension too as they snuck around hoping not to be seen or heard. Really enjoyed this. Good take on "gifts".
I actually found myself holding my breath - hoping to help them NOT get caught! What a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.
Very cute. Your descriptions are great. It was a fun read.
I could see this whole episode so clearly. A charming, well-written story. I wonder if it is based on fact?

Delightful story. Great writing. :)
I really enjoyed the chuckles in this fun story. It is a refreshing change from the sea of seriousness this week.
Congratulations on your excellent win, Diana. As well as your 1st Place win in Level 2, you also made it into the Top 40 overall, ranking 22nd out of all the entries. Well done! That's an excellent achievement.

Time to move up to Level 3 now.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
You are clearly on a roll. Enjoy Advanced, but be warned: the competition is tough! I'm delighted to see you coming on in leaps and bounds in your writing