The Official Writing Challenge
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08/04/16
You lost me. Therefore, I do not feel qualified to give any ccmment on the writing. Probably was good if I could have understood it.
08/04/16
The point you were trying to make is unclear to me. But you put a lot of work into it.
08/07/16
You didn't lose me and your article is very well written, but...

Many moons ago, having been taught evolution at school and also having a keen interest in psychology from mental health nursing days, I believed that somehow there was a way that including the scriptures, all three could sit together nicely. My journey is too detailed for a comment box, but suffice it to say that in my case, it was my lack of trust in lettin God speak to me through the scriptures that set me off on a wild goose chase. I now believe that if God had wanted us to know the details, he would have told us in the beginning.

This is not a criticism of your excellent work, but a vast difference of opinion.
08/07/16
And as an afterthought, your story may have been a creative peice of fiction, in which case I will feel rather silly. Ha!