The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow!

What narrative voice you have. I know I heard it somewhere in last weeks challenge.

I don't mind loosing to this thought provoking writ.

Blessings.
09/11/09
Very well done! You made me feel like I was there.
09/16/09
This is a really great story. It's well-written with a wonderful message. I found myself getting a little misty-eyed as I read your story.