The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/05
Yikes! Sounds like the enemy didn't want this production to go on! You share some good thoughts. I think it may need a bit of work on the flow but overall, a great effort. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Blessings, Lynda
06/08/05
A good effort, I had to re-read parts as some of the comparatives lost me. A good re-write and you have a winner.
06/09/05
PTL you son-in-law was not injured. Good comparisons. May need a teensy tweeking, but overall very good!:0)
06/10/05
Wow - thanks for sharing that!
I enjoyed this! I froze the first time "Jesus" fell, but I quickly caught on. :-D Good job!