The Official Writing Challenge
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Very neat story! Thanks for sharing. It's really neat to get a peak into a person's real life.
01/25/08
Well done. I've never been in this situation, but you described each step well enough that I was right there with you.
Good job...keep writing.
01/26/08
The character sketch of the experienced officer was very vivid. Well done!
01/26/08
This was a nice clean piece of writing with some great splashes of humor in it. I loved the bit where his legs were in his ears :)
01/26/08
Great story. You put in lots of details, but you kept the story moving along. I think my heart dropped right along with the MC's when the mistake was uncovered.