The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/06
Oh great--now I have that song in my mind! Good job at making your point, but your piece is a bit rough around the edges. For example, "mysterical" and "gustling" are not words (I don't think). Your message is loud and clear: not Rhonda but Jesus!
03/02/06
Good message, but I have to agree with Jan about the roughness around the edges. Mysterical?