The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/06
Story started out with a bang! Kids fighting in back seat. I was intrigued. Then in paragraphs 2,3 & 4 I got bogged down and bored, (almost turning away); but THEN!..You saved the Best until the last! So glad I didn't give up the Read - as the pictures you painted of that beautiful "starry and Quiet night in the middle of nowhere" were just awesome!! Very well written and a magnificent Read! Thank you!
02/06/06
Enjoyed the contrast all around. Been there in both too. Wonder how this would be different written by your cousin..? LOL Glad to see in the end--you really were both in the same space! God bless ya, littlelight