The Official Writing Challenge
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An interesting take on topic. I did feel kinda sad for little Darcy, but there wasn't very much "personal story" to her, I had a hard time identifying, because I couldn't really connect to the character the way I wanted. There is so much potential here-a good job-next time, if you have the space (word count wise, lol) try to go more indepth into Darcy or the character. Make me, as the reader want to understand/know her better. This has some good stuff in here, in spite of the sad thought of her mother. Thanks for sharing this! ^_^