The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/07
This is powerful reading! A very unique perspective on fellowship, and I hung on every word.

One minor suggestion: break your longer paragraphs into smaller chunks--easier on the eye.

I loved this, and I learned a great deal.
10/20/07
You are either really, really smart or you did lots of good research. I was moved by what I learned from this piece.
10/22/07
You totally brought me there and made me long to know the people that you've so vividly described. I enjoyed this very much. Excellent description
10/25/07
Your descriptions are so vivid! You painted a scene with dynamic color and texture; I could see it all. More than that--I could feel it.