The Official Writing Challenge
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05/11/07
I could feel your love for both these men in every word. I enjoyed this very much. Nice job!
05/12/07
Your story held my interest all the way through. Colorful character, your father, but the smoking made my hair stand on end, lol. Found some grammatical errors, but with a careful revision this story should find a place in some publication. Nice work.