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TITLE: The Invitation
By Trisha Jackson
12/19/08
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Just pondering about the birth, life, and resurrection of Jesus Christ...
"I just talked to you yesterday and you said you would call me back, but you never did. What happened? Did you forget my number?

I saw you yesterday riding in your grey Jeep Cherokee, I waved, but you didn't wave back. Don't you recognize my face?

By the way I called you last week, but the phone just rang. I left a message, but I haven't heard back from you yet. Didn't you recognize my voice?

Your grandmother called me yesterday. She mentioned your name. I smiled and told her that everything would be okay. She talks to me about you all the time.

When was the last time you checked your email? I sent you several messages, but maybe I got accidentally place into your SPAM folder. Hmm just my luck.

I came by your house a month ago and knocked at the door. I thought I saw someone inside, but no one answered. Where you at home?

I even tried to fax you. I'm trying to get this invitation to you about my party. The line was busy. I guess you were on the other line. Is there a good time to reach you?

I luv u so mch, I snt mi sn ovr 2 brng u a gft. That was the text message I sent you. Did you know what my message said?

Well, I'm sure I have your attention now:

I'm having a party. It's around Christmas time. I sent my invitation to the address I had on file. It's also a birthday party.
Yeah, it's my son's birthday this month-
Do you think you can come?

RSVP ASAP,
GOD
© Thelma P. Jackson
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