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TITLE: I am absolutely yours
By Trisha Jackson
07/02/07
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This is poem was originally just a poem, but out music ministry is considering it for a song. Just wanted to see what you guys thought. It's pretty simple.
I am absolutely yours

You sent your son
To die for me.
He gave his life
And now I’m free.

He paid it all
On Calvary.
He shed his blood
To show us your love.

I couldn’t imagine what it costs
To save a world from being lost
He gave his best and now I know
What it means to give your all

So I present my body as
A living sacrifice
Acceptable to you O’Lord
This is what you’re longing for.

And yes, I am absolutely yours.
I surrender all.
Yes, I am absolutely yours.
© Thelma P. Jackson
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