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TITLE: Unaborted little girl (God speaks)
By Trisha Jackson
06/29/07
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This is a poem based on what I think God saids when a baby girl is conceived in her mother's womb and allowed to live. Kind of different, but here I go.
Unaborted little girl
(God speaking)

You’ll charm them with your personality.
It’s okay to show off your unique style.
For you were fearfully and wonderfully made
By me, creator of all things.
I look at you and I smile.

You are ready to decorate.
Sparkling gemstones, diamond based
Atlast the finishing touches
Interlaced, and full of grace
Inner beauty, all over the place.

The possibilities are endless.
So creative and full of fun;
In my image and my likeness,
I call you my beloved one
for I’ve only just begun.

So I lay out life before you
Choose wisely and carefully.
Keep my word deep in your heart.
Guard it fiercely, selfishly,
For it never will depart.

Cause I’ll never leave you wanting,
Nor forsake my creation.
Oh I loved you at first sight,
For I am the one and only,
Great redeemer, giver of life.

© Thelma P. Jackson
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