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TITLE: Totally Crazy
By Nicole Van Der Merwe
09/15/09
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This song is a bit different. Was written while making a cup of coffee in the kitchen. There is music to it a bit of a rock genre. Would like anny opinions thanks.
I’m totally crazy, totally mad
Totally sold out for You my Jesus
A smile on my face like a Cheshire cat
Smug as a bug on a rug

Chorus:

Jesus I never thought I could
Jesus I never though I would
Be falling, falling
Head over heals in love with you

You are so delectable
You are so completely rad
Jesus you just blow my mind
Far beyond my wildest dreams
That’s….. Why…… I’m…….

Totally crazy, totally mad………. (Repeat)
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