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This is an excellent metaphor and application. You had me feeling the water and the itching.
08/21/21
Good beginning very descriptive the plant is attractive looking. Like Satan he makes sin attractive.

Your entry fits the topic.

Even knowing the warning signs, we get distracted or fall for a lie and fall.

Lesson learned protect yourself as you learned when you weed your garden. The gear is like the Bible. It’s there but if you don’t use it you can get into trouble.

Good piece of work and I enjoyed it,

Thank you
08/27/21
Congratulations on your placing. Well done.