The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/15
Enjoyable way to recall some highly important truths taught by our Savior. Good work.

God Bless you.
10/29/15
Jesus was a master story-teller, but when hearts are not open, and ears aren't in tune to His ways, it sure makes it difficult for them to see the deep truths He portrays with His words!

I like the way you structured this poem. Quite easy to read.
10/29/15
This poem had a nice flow to it. I liked that your poem had simple messages similar to the parables Jesus wrote.
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