The Official Writing Challenge
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Your pacing was spot on. You did a great job of creating suspense and impending doom. I could almost hear the dramatic music like they play on TV when something big is going to happen. I thought your dialog moved the story along and developed the characters nicely. The ending was precious too.
06/14/15
A most engaging story and fits well with other stories of angels and their divine work. Great writing!
06/17/15
What a great story - told with an immediacy that must surely come from close or personal experience.
Well done.
Congratulations on ranking 16th overall! Happy Dance!