The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this story. I can feel the emotions pop off the page as I rooted for your MC. I thought the ending was inspired. You covered the topic in a unique and interesting way. Great job.
Interesting story. One you could expand! Thanks
02/05/14
Great job with the topic at hand, I really liked this story. Nicely done.

God bless~
02/05/14
Many a many grandma’s prayers have helped bring the lost to the light, I am sure! I enjoyed this!
02/06/14
Wonderful storytelling. Congratulations on your win!
02/06/14
Congratulations on your win Cheryl!
I loved this story from beginning to end. Congratulations - a well earned win
02/06/14
Congratulations!

God bless~
02/07/14
Good job, Cheryl. Congratulations. God bless.
02/09/14
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! This was so creative and beautifully descriptive. I wanted to keep reading more.