The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/06
I've never read anything before with so many one line paragraphs--it was an interesting read with all the few words of comment from the kids in the class.

I like the way the teacher was able to draw the personality in the picture and capture the souls of the kids, and this reader.
07/22/06
I like the concept of art expressing who a person is and not just what he looks like. What an impressive art teacher!

Excellent writing - the short paragraphs work well for the short dialogues between the teacher and students - well done.
07/22/06
Very interetsing presentation. Great job. Fresh writing is always a pleasure to read.
God Bless!!
You know those tiny hairs that are on the back of your neck? They're still standing up! My favorite so far this week. Loved the quick one liners. I could see the portrait come to life. Simply amazing read.
07/24/06
What happened to Tina? Is a portrait the soul of a person? Hmmm? However, very unique look at this weeks subject; but an easy read and nicely done.
07/25/06
interesting conversations to bring into the topic.
07/27/06
Great story. I really liked how God's hope defined who he was at the end. Nice!
07/27/06
As always, you are the teacher and I am the student. Your "life" has blessed your "work" with truth and light. Loved it my friend.