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Magnificent ... the hope of life and the way she is so attuned to God ... beautiful.
Glorious story! I loved the Hawthorne touch, with the loons reflecting the spiritual tone throughout. You held my fascination; I've been in that scary place, too. It's indescribable when the faith wells up at His word and His confirming signs! Thanks for this!
There is serenity in every sentence of this marvelous story. Thank you so much for this picture of hope.
Beautiful! I loved the way you used the loons to set the story.
A breath of fresh air to read! Beautiful work, beautiful hope.
The reason it went so smoothly is that you were merely the instrument in God's hand when He wrote it. Truly from a Master's hand. Wonderful.
Wow! Amazing images! You are definitely a master at work. :-)
This writing is so genuine, a reader is able to experience the story as if trading places with one of the characters. The loons made a beautiful frame for the painting.