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Chills and tears. WOW. Impressive writing, beautiful story. incredible message. Top notch entry. One thing I found a little difficult to understand was the line about her feeling the warmth of his tears. Could she feel that in a comma? maybe she could. I've never researched this and you probably have. Anyway, fantastic entry. Heart wrenching ending.
Great entry, and I loved how you let Andy come to a place of peace on God's time table. The whole piece screams TRUST GOD! :)
Beautifully, sensitively written. Loved the progression in the fiance and the way the story had no easy ending - and yet a happy ending!
This is exceptional! Awesome entry, so full of human emotion.
Heartwrenching, yet hopeful because of the peace Heather had throughout. Great voice and thought dialogue. Nice work!
Great entry! Love your work Tim, and you're starting Masters with a bang! Great stuff!
I love absolutely everything about this. I was so happy to read the last sentence...this is perfect.
Beautiful - well done, and such a message at the end.
Beautiful. I also thought the last line was very special. Well done.
This was awesome. You made it so real. Great job.
Good realism throughout. Shows good planning and judgement in the way you handled this scene.
Your writing just throbs with action, Tim! I love this...right to the meltdown ending. A master, indeed!
This is a true love story. You did an incredible job with both characters emotions and anguish.