The Official Writing Challenge
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06/03/06
Encouragement to anyone who has had an abortion. But I was a bit confused by: “And You believe her words?” the accuser screamed. “No,” the Son of God answered. “I know her heart.” The No seemed like it should have been "Yes, and I also know her heart." (Just me, I think.) Very well written.
06/03/06
wow! someone has talent! incredibly written. was really awestruck concerning the polish of this piece. very impacting, beautiful and will probably score every high. great work!
06/05/06
Very powerful and great interplay between heaven and earth. Excellent in construction and pace. You've done very well here and you'll score high. Good work!
06/05/06
This is one of my favorites this week--you did the "changes of scene" beautifully. Awesome.
06/05/06
Well done! You paint a realistic picture of the anguish this young woman is experiencing as well as the unseen battle the defeated foe tries to mount.
06/05/06
Wow, and wow.
Ok, my two favorite lines...
"Silence!" thundered the Father. "She speaks."
and...
“No,” the Son of God answered. “I know her heart.”

This is a powerful story. Thank you for sharing.

God bless,

Kevin
06/06/06
Teary-eyed I send my compliments to you. Good work.
06/07/06
Beautifully written.

I was slightly confused about whether the pills were meant to cause the abortion and whether she took them or not in the end. But from the comments, I gathter that nobody else is confused, so I guess that is just me.

Well done.