The Official Writing Challenge
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Ditto. Love it!
Exquisite! How beautifully you set up for the fulfillment of Anna's longing! "Is this the day You intervene
And blow the veil away?"--Wow!
This is a gift. It ministers not just for then, but for us...this day! An anointed and beautiful poem.
Written by an anointed hand! Powerful!
Absolutely wonderful!
Just perfect in every way!
This is beautiful on so many levels--I read it as a prayer from a contempory woman, then when I saw the Scripture, there was a wonderful aha! moment. It works--and beautifully--both ways. Bravo!
Excellent. Beautifully written.
Oh, I do so love good poetry, and this rings like a bell! My favorite lines, the years carving their lines on me and eyes that see what was and what will be, are exquisite. And it is so reader friendly, I can imagine a parent reading this to a child, and the child getting the message. Another addition to my "favorites!" Thank you.
Breathtaking! Definately a Masterpiece written by a Master.
Oh, wow! I read this as a contemporary prayer as well, and then had to re-read it after the scripture reference. Amazing work. Simply amazing!
Oh, yes, Mel, this is absolutely beautiful in every way! Perfect!