The Official Writing Challenge
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Though somewhat predictable, this is a beautiful piece, expertly written. Thank you.
Oh, forgot - is he 51 or 56?
Nice piece. I do have to agree with dub about the age and there were a couple of typo's. We all make them. I know I do. Sorry for having to point it out.
Your story moved so quickly. Great pacing! The dialogue was also a strength.
Liked the storyline! The message was cool!
A few inconsistencies and struggles, but the story itself is sound and was put together quite nicely. Very good work and great message.
This was a good story. The age did leave some questions, but it is good writing.
I enjoyed this story, the message may be predictable, but nonetheless a pertinent message. After years of running it is often something simple that brings a wayward soul home.
You hooked me at the start! Enjoyed this story that spans a lifetime and ends with a new beginning. :-)