The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1569 times
Member Comments
Powerful writing, strong message. Thanks for sharing this.
A painful, but well-written glimpse of reality. Great job!
The smashing of the plant pots really illustrated the depth of emotions well - a good touch.
I really like this take on love. Very strong piece about a terrible situation. You brought the conflict and characters to life with expertise. Well done! And just maybe another winning entry!
Such pain and anger! You did a very good job here at expressing all of the emotions! Great definition on real love.
Realistic portrayal of a very difficult situation. I agree with Sandra; the emotions were 'right there'.... both Michelle's and Kevin's... Well done.
Excellent! The title fits perfectly. If only we could display some of this tough love when needed.
Wow! What an awesome portrayal of a real life situation so many of us parents face. Good job.
Queen Janet has struck again! Another perfect story from her awesome pen!

You just gotta be a pro, I know, I know, I know!!

Great story. Loved it!