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10/28/24
Perfect biblical story to illustrate kindness. I loved the comparison of kindness to water. The story is rich with description and detail. My only suggestion for improvement is that the story doesn’t seem to have an ending it just stops. Other than that, an excellent job.
10/29/24
This is a beautiful retelling of the biblical story. Descriptive language, dialogue, simile, and narrative style slow down the story that we know well and keep us thoroughly engaged. Great writing.
This is a powerful story. You brought it to life right before my eyes. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
11/07/24
Another wonderfully-written piece, Jack. You brought out her doubt that she'd done the right thing coming to Bethlehem. We tend to think she made her decision and never looked back. But, do any of us truly do that with monumental decisions? No. Thank you for reminding us of her fragile humanness.

With your permission, I would like to copy this and read it whenever we study the book of Ruth.