The Official Writing Challenge
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04/20/23
A good mix of humility and confidence is reflected in your prayer, which could well be a means of inspiring young couples to clarify their hopes and dreams.
04/23/23

Excellent! Your last stanza is the epitome and embodiment of your poetic message shared in the humblest and simplest way possible. On your own, you can do nothing to capture another's full body, soul and spirit. But with the Holy Spirit - the Executive Agency of The Godhead, everything is possible.
04/27/23
A very worthwhile prayer with the perfect ending stanza that truly had an important message with humor.
04/27/23
Although I'm not married, that is also my prayer.
04/28/23
No wonder this is the EC. It's beautiful. Congratulations.
07/01/23
I love this poem! I printed it out to keep in my Bible.
07/13/23
I loved this poem! I printed it off to give my husband of 56 years. Great job!