The Official Writing Challenge
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This wonderful entry makes my heart rejoice with the narrator's description of those giving and receiving love in a nursing home. I was especially touched by her mother's prayer for release from pain, yet recognizing Jesus' pain for sins He never committed. The author's character descriptions were real and memorable. Excellent writing throughout!
08/04/21
I've always thought nurses were angels in disguise. God bless you for writing this and for the blessing you were to those poor souls in the nursing home.
Wow what a powerful piece. You took me on a journey and I loved the twist ending. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
08/30/21
Oh, this is a wonderful entry. I worked with the elderly in the past and loved it. I enjoyed your descriptions of the residents. And your last line took my breath away.