The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/21
Nice
07/27/21
I enjoyed this piece. Pounding doesn’t have to necessarily make noise. I believe Mary felt pounding within over her guilt and shame. When Mary heard the voice calling her name it reminded me of Jesus calling out to Mary Magdalene at the grave site.
I felt the piece moved smoothly and it held my attention.
Great job.