The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/21
Makes me want to try surfing! Your well written story captures the peace and joy found in God’s creation.
I love your descriptions. It pulled me in right away. I could almost taste the salt water. Being out in nature is where I feel closest to God too.
04/26/21
Your story kept me interested from beginning to end. You had me experiencing everything that you did. I kept thinking, either the author has done some excellent research or he/she is or has been a surfer at one time. Excellent descriptions of where you were, what you were doing and how you felt. My past experience as a secretary came out when I saw the word "favourite." Is that an acceptable spelling for favorite? Excellenet story!
04/26/21
I have never surfed, but I felt I was riding the wave right beside you.
04/28/21
Nice story and cool take on the topic. Well done.
You described everything so well and I felt like I was there with you! Well done!
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!