The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/21
Oh how lovely! Very beautiful imagery. I didn’t want it to end. You captured the emotion very well.
This is a beautiful poem. It flows nicely. If you didn't include verse at end, it would be difficult to see the topic in it. You have beautiful descriptions. I felt like I could feel the emotions from a flower. That's not easy to do, but you made it seem natural.
Congratulations! Happy Happy Dance! So happy to see your name again regularly!