The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute story. I loved the line, “Mom’s right eyebrow arched so high, it almost disappeared into her hair.” It made me chuckle and it set the right tone fore the whole thing. Nice job.
This is a good family story. I liked the wise mom with an expressive eyebrow.
Nothing better than a Wrigley story! I can just see the mom's raised eyebrow and how Wrigley knew she was in for trouble if her middle name was called.

It is so good to be back.
Oh, I enjoyed this. A good lesson in the story, and Wrigley is a hoot. Well done.
That Wrigley is a stinker!
Congratulations on your 8th place finish this week, Shann!
Yet another fun read about the antics of Wrigley and Camden... One spelling correction needed - "Mom MADE the tsk sound." Other than that, another delightful story.