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A heart-warming vignette, and great spiritual application. I pray that your son experiences healing, either divine or divinely inspired cure.
This young woman sounds amazing.
She is definitely a keeper!
This story brought tears to my eyes. I like how you tied it together in the end.
Excellent devotion! Congratulations on being first in EC!
Your story is inspiring. I think your son is a true hero and the loyalty of the girl is exceptional. Too bad there aren't more of us with these Christlike qualities.
This is so powerful. I love how you started out with a real story, an emotional beautiful real story and then related to the Bible. Positively brilliant. Congratulations! Happiest of Happy Dances!!!
Thank you for such a beautiful story of real life true love; the Shulamite maiden, Ruth, and the Proverbs 31 wife and mother all embodied in your son's girlfriend, who I hope is or will become his wife, as she's definitely a keeper! A wonderfully crafted story from beginning to end.
And a huge CONGRATULATIONS on your well earned first place EC!
Your son and this young woman have an amazing love story. Congratulations on your EC win!

I read that book you talked about, but I can't remember the name of it.
This made me teary-eyed. Your son and his girlfriend both sound amazing. This is well written and touches the heart. No wonder it placed first. Well done.