The Official Writing Challenge
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Great description with a good dose of fun!
I really enjoyed reading this. Your images were hilarious. A Twister game was the perfect comparison. Great writing.
I loved this! And I thought of the Twister game before you mentioned it. I can picture this happening in real life. Well done, and I hope it places high!
You had me grinning from beginning to the very end. Your description is delightful and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
This. Is. So. Good! Loved the story!
A fun read for sure!