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This kept me interested throughout-well done!
Oh, how I love the emotions welling up in me - this is beyond poignant.

Thank you. May you find joy and comfort in His Arms. Hugs!
10/22/20
Well done. The descriptions of the sounds and setting made it easy to experience. I could feel the emotion - heartbreak of him and his family for the separation and his peace at the end.