The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/20
My favorite lines...
“ The motley gaggle of followers sharing his dust on the road hardly seemed worthy of him. My learning and wealth would put me in good stead with someone like this. All I needed was his blessing.”

SHARING HIS DUST ON THE ROAD ...that really spoke to me personally this morning. A perfect picture of what following Him entails. Who would want to share dust? Oh, but it’s not just any dust!

Thank you for this and well done!
Wow, you really brought this story to life!
What a terrific rewrite! You brought your characters to most vivid light! I want more...

May you find joy and comfort in His Arms.

Hugs!
10/21/20
What a great portrait of Jesus! You did a great job of bringing this story to life.