The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/20
What a lovely entry - so well written and I love how you tie in a physical habit with the spiritual. I would not be surprised to see this in the winners' circle next week.
08/27/20
A sure winner!
08/27/20
A great analogy between Carlos the bird and our lives. Skillfully written. Good job. God bless.
Great story!
08/28/20
An excellent illustration to make your point. I felt sad for Carlo just like we feel sad when sin takes over anyone's life. But it was great that he recovered and even better that you could write of our hope(cure)in the Savior.
08/29/20
Beautiful wrap-up!
Blessings~
09/02/20
Good information and a good analogy.
09/05/20
Congrats!
Blessings~