The Official Writing Challenge
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Yikes! As bad as that?! That must have been a very unpleasant and uncomfortable experience. Thank you for sharing.
Your well-crafted story made me feel like I was right there with you. Nicely done.
Wow, what a story! Did this happen to you, personally? Hope this entry places high.
08/08/20
Wow! What an experience. And the way you told about it held my attention all the way through.
08/09/20
What a sad story. Thank you for sharing.
08/10/20
So sad but and excellent story.
08/13/20
Congratulations!
08/13/20
Congratulations Corrine on your win. Great job.
What a timely year to share your true story. So many don't understand racism and how alive it is still today. Your story broke my heart for so many reasons. Governments are still willing to derail innocent lives based on color and it's vital to hear these accounts to help us understand in some way what so many people understand because of experience. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
Your story, while sad, was excellently written. Congratulations
08/22/20
Congratulations Corrine. I found your story gripping and then was amazed to find it to be a true story. It reminds us of how recently apartheid existed as policy. Sadly, racism and discrimination still persist in many parts of the world. Well written!
08/22/20
My apologies for spelling your name wrongly Corinne. (Hope I got it right this time!)