The Official Writing Challenge
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You made the yearning to be chosen strong. I hoped someone would choose her!
I was thinking this was a young woman looking for a mate at a group meeting. (Been there, done that!) This was a great twist.
I really enjoyed this. You did an awesome job of starting with a couple of conflict and I always enjoy a good twist ending.
Good twist on the topic. Adoption is such an important hope for many children. Keep up the good work.
Good content. You had me captivated from the start. Well done. Thank you.
Very good. I like the way you left us hanging at the end. Of course, I chose her! LOL Good job