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07/24/20
Savoring the moment. I can relate.
That is so beautiful!
07/28/20
Interesting poem - love the final line.
This is lovely and takes me to a few days after my surgery and a very painful week. We went out and watch hundreds of fireflies and saw the comet. It was the perfect end to a difficult week and a day I still hold onto now that the fireflies are almost gone and the comet can't be seen anymore. You reminded me to take that peace with me. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
07/30/20
Such a beautiful description of the moment.
May I ask what it was that captured your gaze?