The Official Writing Challenge
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07/09/20
Well this sucked me right in. I love cars. I rode down that mountain with you. Great writing!
07/10/20
Got my heart racing!
I read faster as you went faster and faster. How scary that must have been. I had no brakes on my dad's 1964 Mustang,and that was on a street corner. Very traumatic. This should place well.
Great suspense here!
07/12/20
Yikes! What an experience. You certainly held my attention with this story!
07/20/20
Wow, that really had me tensed up. Good job!