The Official Writing Challenge
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A very creative take on a timeless story. For myself, I would have liked a bit more direction sooner, as to the reason for his lament. It seemed the tension led me nowhere for too many paragraphs.
You well-portrayed the imagery of the peaceful river. Wished I were there!
05/08/20
David was a man after God's own heart because he sought Him out.
05/10/20
Good imagery. Keep up the good work!
You do an awesome job of building the suspense right out of the gate. I felt like I was right there. Powerful message that really makes me think.
Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance!