The Official Writing Challenge
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A very creative take on a timeless story. For myself, I would have liked a bit more direction sooner, as to the reason for his lament. It seemed the tension led me nowhere for too many paragraphs.
You well-portrayed the imagery of the peaceful river. Wished I were there!
David was a man after God's own heart because he sought Him out.
Good imagery. Keep up the good work!
You do an awesome job of building the suspense right out of the gate. I felt like I was right there. Powerful message that really makes me think.
Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance!