The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent story and I want to ready more!
05/03/20
Such a sweet loving story...the main character just makes you love her so easily.:) I like the way you described "memory lane" at the end. Great story!
You did an awesome job of capturing this character. It felt authentic and I was pulled back into those memories. I think the message is super powerful. I've never thought of memory lane like a Y, but what a fantastic mental picture and a mighty reminder.
05/07/20
I'm so glad you placed in the Editor's Choice---this is a great story! Congratulations!
05/07/20
I loved your sweet story and it's so well done. Congratulations on your win!