The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, powerful story!
I enjoyed this. I think you wrote on a topic that is hard for so many people, especially this time and day. I can especially relate to feeling like I've failed even when I just struggle with one part, yet succeed at another thing. I find I don't give myself a break for what I consider not a perfect performance. I'm so grateful Jesus takes my burden from me over and over again. Even though I yank it back from him, he still opens his arms, willing to carry it again and again. That's a powerful message.
This is a well-written story that God could use to help someone who has trouble forgiving themself and trouble forgetting. what God has forgiven. I know someone who will be encouraged and comforted by this story. I will pass it on. Burning the reminders is a new beginning--not just an ending.
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall. Happy Dance! I really really liked this!