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That's so awesome! God is our provider for sure!
05/03/20
Such a great reminder of God's faithfulness! I like the way you presented your method of thankfulness and remembering. I, too, have seen God's provision over the years, but tend to forget when the bills pile up. Maybe I'll start recording it at the top of the excel document I use! :) :)
I liked the Bible verse you built this piece upon. It fits really well. I think it's my own personal preference, but I tend to not like stories as much where the author suddenly speaks to the reader. For me, I think a traditional transition works better and I might start that paragraph off with Even though I won... That's a great way to pull the reader in. I'm sure many can relate to memorizing verses in Sunday school. I really like the message of giving thanks in all things. I also enjoy your subtle sense of humor and would like to see even more of it. You have a clear message and will touch the readers in a great way.