The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh what a poignant story. Well done!
You caught the emotions and painted them with words. A well-shaped and well-written account.
Beautiful, touching story. I like how you brought Alice's Adventures to inspire her memory. Great writing!
Wow what powerful piece. You did an awesome job of setting up the conflict. You grabbed my attention right away and I found myself holding my breath. The ending was outstanding as well. You brought the story full circle. It's not easy to have both a very strong beginning and ending, but you made it look so.
You drew me right in, painted a picture throughout, took us through various emotions, and gave us a strong ending. Great job.
I agree with the other comments that you have a strong beginning and ending. Well-written story! Congratulations on your EC!