The Official Writing Challenge
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Such a powerful message!
05/01/20
I appreciated your message in your story and happy ending.
I enjoyed this story. I could feel the emotions of the MC and the pressure he felt under. I'm not sure you really nailed the topic. The character seemed to have had his life choices reviewed, but I'm not sure I would guess the topic if I didn't know it. I did like the message though. It often seems some men forget the second part of that scripture. I enjoyed the ending.
05/03/20
Words (and actions) of a father can be quite powerful and stay with us for a while....you showed that well in your story.I'm glad the MC learned the lesson of cherishing!
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!