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This was a really frightening story. Several things were clear immediately. This was a girl who put others' needs ahead of her own pleasure. She had learned at an early
age to trust in God. And she had wise parents who were not afraid to take steps to bring to light the wrong acts of another.
I am so glad for all three things, and I'm so thankful for God's protection. This well told story should serve as an example of how God protects and how wrong must be confronted.
Wow! Is this non-fiction? How terrible for the child, and glad that the parents believed her. Well done!
This is a powerful story. As soon as Mr Bennett entered the scene, I felt my heart rate quicken and could sense his malevolent intentions. You did a great job of adding such depth to a character in such a short time. The message is powerful for sure, and things like this happen way more than we can imagine.
Oh my! Every parent's nightmare. You held my interest and my breath!
I could picture this story as it unfolded. How scary. You did a great job on a difficult topic.