The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/20
Oh, I got chills upon reading this. Well done, great message, so poignant and powerful.

Blessings~
01/17/20
Great story!
Beautiful and poignant this is. Hope it places!
This is a sweet story. You did a nice job of showing it from different angles. For me the constant POV shifts made it hard for me to follow. I think if everything was just from Calvin's POV it would have popped even more. The message is profound. People tend to stay inside themselves and not notice the world around. I love that the Calvin saw it all and acted.
01/22/20
Great story telling! I loved your entry!~
I loved this story!
Congratulations on your EC Award.

This was a moving and poignant piece. I was a little confused at the different POV shifts but the message was loud and clear.
01/24/20
Jack,
Congrats on such a great piece!
Blessings~